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ลำดับตอนที่ #4 : poem had written by me :)

tradigy love poem

when the sky was cover 
we can met for hour 
everything must not over
cause i'm wanna be your color 
and it will be 4ever

lol. it's from when i listen the song LOVE STORY -taylor swift 
from tragidy of love Romio & juliet 

Sad love poem

:original
the rainy day, i can remember
the day you asked me don't be together 
the melancholy that i never had met ever
the sudden about your behavior
cause our love same as anticlockwise tower
don't have you i'm like a child in house foster
you are bonafade love ,if haven't you my life is worthless in this world either

inspiration from Grenade - Bruno Mars 

:EDIT GRAMMAR by my teacher P'Peachy

the rainy day,i could remember
the day you asked me not be together 
the melancholy that i never had met ever
the bereft in your behavior
casue ' our love is like an anticlockwise tower
without you i'm like a lonely child in the foster
Oh ! bona fide love ,without you,my life is worthless in this world either 


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